Tip #3: Add a you-filled summary line.
When I write copy for newsletter appeals, my clients often send summary information or article copy already written by their communications folks.
My job is to make it more donor-focussed without changing the content too much.
One quick and easy way to do this is to include a summary line or sentence at the top and bottom of the article that clearly states that the donor helped make this story possible. You can see this in the previous two examples - and one coming up!
Tip #4: Report back on the content from past appeals.
Seems simple enough right? Your newsletter should ideally report back to donors on how you’ve used their last gift.
Did they respond to a direct mail appeal? What did you ask for? It’s important to update donors and show that you’ve used their money in the way you said you would. Or at least share that you’re working towards that goal.
In the example below, we shared photos and an update on a Thanksgiving lunch funded by donors. In the Fall direct mail appeal, we had specifically asked donors to make a gift to the lunch program. We also asked donors to write a message of thanks and gratitude on a place mat and send it back with their gift, so it made sense to share some photos of those!